The past Demon

Chapter 9: Wrath of love

"ARGH!" I screamed in agony, as the pain through my body, I tried to get back up, I channeled all my strength to my legs and knees, to get back up. after a few moments I managed to get back on my feet, with pain traveling throughout my body, I could barely see straight. My wings weighed like two moons, covered with blood, snapped into 3 pieces either side.. as I tried to walk towards Visoth in all my anger, I kept stumbling... my breath was heavy and the air felt so damp... "one more step" I said to myself, with the intention of smiting this so called angel to smitherens.

I mustered all my strength to try an deliver a fatal blow, and just as I lift my fist to strike him... Darkness. The next thing I knew, i was laying on a soft material familiar material, much like the ones we have in heaven. I slowly opened my eyes, and found myself in complete light, 'What's this i thought to myself?'.
my whole being was submerged in light, i darted my eyes around and there was no shadows, no darkness nothing, but pure light. As I tried to lift my body up to view my surrounding, excruciating pain went throughout my body...I screamed out so loud, it echoed through the air. "GET BACK DOWN" I heard a strange voice say, " You're in no condition to do anything, visoth has done quite a great deal of damage to you..." the voice said.
"I must get back up! I need to help protect Gaz, I'm part of him, I can't be separated..."
"Calm down Estalious!" another voice said,
"Gabriel? is that you?"
"Yes, and your in trouble now, you let anger and murder get into your mind during your second chance!"
thoughts ran through my head, but more than that, regret. I can't go back to being a demon...
"But... you're lucky, The Creator has said, that you may return to your Gaz, as soon as your well again"
I felt relieved, and smiled. Somehow though i was in extreme pain, I felt comfort and peace, I took this time to recover as my small gap of peace throughout the rough storms that i have been.
"Gabriel! can you tell me... how is lizzy?, What did Vis... Visoth... Do..do... to he..er....?" I struggled to ask through the pain in my body.
"look next to you" Gabriel replied pointing next to me.

As I turned my head, *CRACK* I heard something break, My vision became very blured once again, I struggled to even see striaght, as my vision doubled and trippled whilst becoming blurer and blurer, I couldn't make out if she was alright or she was in critical, or was it even her! but in my heart i knew it was her, and just in that moment.*Thud*
*Darkness once again*

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Alright I know it's been a long while, it's probally going to be a reallylong while till i post chapter 10! xD... so like let your imaginations run wild for a while!..

I'll be heading off away for a while...

Ta ta All!

P.S could you sms me ur number n name, coz my old phone died....

The Past Demon

Chapter 8: The Real After Shock

Even though it was so dark, I could continuously hear my fallen brothers mockery, and feel the continuous pain i that ran through my entire body.. I tried to regain my consciousness. But Just as I managed to pull my self up to my feet, I collapsed. The last thing I heard was Dennis laughing at Gaz, saying,"now you know why we call it after shock".

"Gaz... Gaz..."
"huh what happened?"
"Hey Gaz... that was a great night we had"
"who are you? where's Dennis?! "
"I'm Crystal... can't you remember me?"

Confusion was running through Gaz, he had no idea what he did last night...

"I can't remember a thing! All I remember is I picked up a drink called after shock, danced a while.. then.. nothing! "
"Oh Gaz... How can you not remember? we danced.. then we got together to eat some mid night snack.. and you know, you came on to me and you know..."
"know what?"

Crystal slipped out of the bed, her body was slim and slick, her hair was long and brown, her eyes were hazelnut. Everything about her was so voluptuous. Gaz was caught in awe, staring up and down her body, head to toe... Then he snapped!

"Oh SHIT!"
"What's the matter Gaz, love?"
"no way.. I didn't, we didn't" Gaz Panicked, as he slowly looked under the blanket.
"mm hmm" Crystal hummed in a very happy tone.

Gaz slapped himself, and grabbed his head, I felt the frustration running through his head, it was like the mixed feeling or regret, and not knowing what to do, Gaz said to himself, "What have I done.. what have I done, this is terrible!" I couldn't comprehend what he meant, what was so bad about this? and why was it a bad thing? isn't this what humans do?

"Crystal... I cannot do these things.. this is wrong..."Gaz Said looking down in shame.
you could see Crystals face drop, "I see" she said softly..

There was something about her that I couldn't see through, as I watched, I realised she too had an angel guarding her that looked similar to visoth, just, this angel seemed to be molded too have a body just like Crystals... beautiful it was indeed..

as I observed Crystal, her body started to shudder, and that cheerful voice had seemed to disappear, I spotted a tear, dropping from her face, it swiftly cut through the air, and splashed as it hit the floor. She was sniffing, as more tears fell from her downcast face. It brought back the same distinct, sad feeling I had when I was before the creator..

"What's wrong Crystal?" Gaz said softly,
"It's nothing Gaz" She replied as she sniffed,
"I'm sorry, I just drank a little too much last night, Dennis, said it's good stuff, but I didn't expect to end up here, and doing you know what.." Gaz explained
in a quivering voice Crystal said, "I understand..."

As she wiped the tears away, She lifted her head, with a her puffy eyes, she smiled, with the light gleaming off her face. Crystal stretched out her arm, in a gestures humans do, to greet one another.

"Hi I'm Crystal! I'm 18, and you are?" she asked in a cheerful yet, shaky voice.
Gaz smiled, and did the same, connected each others hands and shaking it.
"The name is Gaz, I'm 19, it's a pleasure to meet you Crystal"
Gaz blushed, and turned away. He was shy, and flushed, his heart was starting to beat faster and faster... I cold feel his heart having a very strong connection with this girl, like two polar ends meeting together, the attraction was very strong...

"what the matter Gaz?" Crystal asked, but just as she asked, she looked down and realised she had been standing there naked.
"oh oh!"
Her face turned red like a cherry, she rushed to get her garments, and rushed into the toilet... what a beauty, I thought to myself, I still couldn't understand what Gaz had done, that was so bad..

I turned to Visoth, and asked him what happened last night, but he did not speak to me, instead, he spat in my face and shouted,

"you demons are so useless!"
"What? what did I do wrong, I was being slaughtered by the others"
"That's exactly what you did wrong, you should've been fighting your brothers long before any of this could happen! but you just stood there, like a freaking pillar of salt!"
"Hey now Visoth, chill down with the insults... I didn't realise my brothers were around..."
"OR MAYBE, ESTAILOUS, YOU DID REALISE, AND YOU WANTED THIS TO HAPPEN! You No Winged Fool!"
"What did you call me? you have no right to insult me, more over NO RIGHT TO SAY I cooperated with any of them! you yourself saw how I was beaten up!"
"Could've been an act.. you are just a demon like the rest, i don't get how the creator could trust you, Maybe I should rid of you myself!" He pulled out his blade, and threw himself toward me, I barley dodged the attack, which left me with a small thin lined wound... As the blood was slowly leaking, Visoth lunged forward for another attack, once again I dodged it. "Stop it Visoth! I refuse to fight!" With his burning eyes, He took another swipe at me. I jumped in the air and somersaulted backwards, evading his attack once again.

"Look visoth you need to stop and get a grip of yourself! you're a well seasoned Guardian An...."
"Gotchya!" I thought I'd never feel the pain once again, as the blood fell from my wing... the excruciating pain travelled through my body.. I could see and sense the anger Visoth had towards me, I looked down in defeat.
"Do what you must..."
Visoth pulled the sword out and lifted his arm above his head, ready to finish me off, but just as that happened, I heard a strange sound *ping* "some one had blocked his attack?" I thought to myself.
"You must stop this visoth, The Creator placed you as a guardian angel, and gave Esatlious a second chance, not so you could kill him, and disobey our order!"
"Stay out of this Lizzy..."
"Drop it visoth! don't make me use my paralytic bullet to put you down!"
Visoth, looked disappointed, and retracted his sword. Turned around, and walked back to Gaz's side.
"Thanks " I said, in a faint voice of relief.
"Don't mention it, not that I like you demons, just, I'm sure the creator gave you a special purpose in life" She replied...

As I turned my head to look at her, I was struck with awe, there she was a beauty to behold, it was Crystals guardian angel. Her face was pure white, and her cheeks had a crimson red blushes, her eyes, were big, and purple, with long eye lashes, her wings were in perfect condition, they shaped like a diamond, and shone like the holiness of the Creator...

"Are you alright?" she asked
I shook my head to come back to myself, "Yea I am, thanks"
She turned and walked back to Crystal in the toilet...

I returned to Gaz, and layed in his body once again...
"Estalious..." Visoth said in a low toned voice,
"yesterday, was a bad day, Gaz lost his purity seal..."
"What do you mean..?" I replied..
"it's exactly what I mean, But not only did he lose it, He made Crystal lose it too.."
I looked down, I felt like a failure, and understood why Visoth was so angry at me.
"You know Estalious, this failure is unacceptable" He said, with a sigh.
"What will become of Gaz now, He broke the law of the creator..?"
"Nothing bad will come to him, but he has opened a door, I tried to keep sealed tight as possible... this will be an easy path for your fallen brothers to get to"

"Guys! HELP!" there was a scream from the toilet, Visoth rushed to the toilet,
"Stay put Estalious, STAY PUT!" He Commanded me.
I heard many shouting and screaming, I heard the sound of my fallen brother, laughing as the were fighting, like psychopaths...

Lizzy flew backwards out of the toilet smashing against another neon wall, much like the one I did in the club... as she fell towards the ground, I felt useless, I wanted to help, but I knew if I left Gaz here, He would be in much trouble...

"GAZ! GAZ!!!" I screamed trying to get him up, But to no avail.. then I saw my fallen brethren thrown themselves onto lizzy, I could not take any more of their unrighteousness, I screamed Gaz's name once again. A thought suddenly came through to his mind, I realised he has some how heard me, so I kept telling him to go to the toilet, some how or another, I felt some sort of connection with Gaz, in thoughts and speech, for the first time, yet I knew Gaz couldn't hear me, just feel what I was saying.

"Crystal! Crystal! you ok in there" Gaz shouted..
There was no reply, it was just all dead silence to Gaz, quickly he jumped out of the bed, and rushed towards the toilet. as he approach the toilet, I reached out and grabbed Lizzy from the my fallen brethren, They hissed at me, calling me the double traitor, the outcast beyond all..

"Crystal!" Gaz said in shock, She seemed motionless on the floor, Gaz picked her up and quickly rushed towards the bed and laid her down, rummaging through his cloths on the floor, he found his trousers, and quickly called 999...

just as he did this my Fallen brethren disappeared, snickering... Lizzy also laid unconscious, as I was holding her.
"Pass her here Estalious..." Visoth said,
as I gently passed her to him, He vanished, for a moment and returned in another second..

"What did you do to her?!" I asked in despair
Visoth grinned..
"Why you little!" I threw a punch towards him and he grabbed it, throwing me across the room on to the floor, I heard my wing crack.
"You demons are all a like.. despisable.. and pathetic.."

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This is the End of Chapter 8! , seems like I got lots of votes :P 2 people not gonna read it haha! 2 think it's boring :( 2 think its interesting! 3 average..

The Past Demon

Chapter 7: Is this for real?!

Since the day of the battle, where the strange fiery darts flew pass, many things has happened, but thankfully nothing bad has come to pass. It's been several years since that battle, and Gaz was now growing in size, strange thing these humans are, able to grow taller and larger by each passing day, and the giants, that were once around us, now seemed to be the same size as us...

Gaz was unique in his look, no angel or human have I ever seen have such mystical and charming features, he grew up to be half a head taller than most people, with broad shoulders, his body was slim, but not as a girl, but like the creators, not what humans, called "skin and bones" but instead fit and perfect. His hair was slightly wavy, brownish black, that grew up to shoulder length. His skin, was as smooth as a emerald crystal surface, and glistened like a polished crystal, it was not dark, nor was it pale, but it was fair. But the most distinct, and unique feature of Gaz was his pearly grey eyes, like one of a wolf's fur. It mesmerized even the fallen ones.

Gaz was one who prayed daily to the Creator, he danced and worshiped him before the alter,and even gained some latent power, through the favour of His most High. But these powers were still hidden from Gaz. The creator forbid me to see the powers He had placed in him, but instead told me, that I would need to live on with the boy, and find it out step by step, as the boy did.

Time passed and still I saw nothing of the power that was given to him, neither did it seem that Gaz was aware that he had been given some power from the creator. It has already been nineteen years since the day, I was given this chance of repentance and I've learned much about humans, yet, they never seize to suprise me.It seems Visoth was right and I was wrong, humans didn't live a life of play, but instead it has been a mixture or work and play.

Now, it came a time where Gaz had to go to this place which humans call, university. I never understood why humans go to these places, to be honest, I think it's all nonsense, They should just listen to the creator... But it seems that they too, like me, have fallen. Only Difference is, the creator loved them so much, He gave them a redeeming sacrifice. Something I always envy, the death of the lion...

"Hey, what's you're name?" Gaz asked some other human, in the class.
"I'm Dennis! and you?" the other boy replied.
"The names Gaz, pleased to meet you!" Gaz said cheerfully.

Dennis, was quite a small person, he was thin, and had short spiky, blond hair. His face was somewhat roundish and his cheeks were Rosy red, he was slightly tanned, and had big, blue eyes... But something about him seemed a miss to me, I felt the strong presence of my fallen brothers surrounding him, never the less, he seemed to be a very cheerful and happy person. Unlike Gaz, he had no guardian angel. Come to think about it, I have noticed that there are many people in this world, walking around without a guardian angel. I asked Visoth about this, but each time the topic was brought up to him, it fell on deaf ears.

Eventually, Gaz and Dennis became the best of friends. Every time, Gaz came near to Dennis, I was happy, the feeling brought much joy to Gaz, and of course in turn, this happiness traveled into my body... The feeling of the heart, pumping faster, and tingly sensations traveling through to the wings, making me feel as if I could soar the skies again...

However, as each day passed, I felt less and less comfortable, though the feeling of joy was there, I felt some heavy burden on my own self, it was like chains started to bound me, and I was unable to move, walls enclosed around me, constraining me, and sheer pressure came crushing down on my head... I knew something was wrong, something was being changing, it wasn't like any other feeling I felt before. The burden got heavier each time, Gaz saw Dennis...

"Hey Gaz, This is what we call a club, We can find all the hottest chicks here"
"You sure about that Dennis? the music is so loud, and I feel really shy around all these girls"
"Don't worry about it Gaz, let me show you the pleasure of life, drink this... it's called After shock"
"You sure this stuff is safe to drink man?"
"Just do it, it'll help you to relax, trust me man! I've been so good to you these past months, don't tell me you can't trust me now?"

I could feel that Gaz felt uncomfortable, he shifted his body in uneasiness, thoughts ran through his head, like, "He's right he's my best buddy, and he's been taking me out and taking care of me a lot recently", "But this is not right, this drink smells weird", "Should I should I not! What should I do!"... I screamed to Gaz, "Why don't you just ask the creator! since He's so close to you!!!" But Obviously he couldn't hear me... He never could.

"Alright Dennis I'll trust you on this one"
Gaz picked up the drink, just before he put it onto his lips, I saw a fallen brother.. in fact, I saw more than a fallen brother, I saw a huge group of them inside the club, this is bad I thought to myself... it didn't strike me at first, but Visoth was missing, I looked around and I could see him fighting off five other fallen brothers... The burden I felt earlier had seemed to become so heavy that I fell to my knees... Then all a sudden..

* Gulp*

I could see double, and my vision became slightly distorted.. "What is this??" I thought to myself... suddenly I was surrounded by my Fallen brothers, the next thing I heard were giggles of girls, and a huge group of deep voiced people laughing...

"Estalious! doesn't this feel great...?"
"Who are you?" as I struggled to keep my focus, but at no avail, I could only see a wavy water like image of the person speaking
"Why don't you come back to us?" I heard another speaking
"Yea, we've found a great sense of fun and joy, these humans are just like toys, their so easy to deceive.."
"No..." I said, with a very weak voice..
"I will never come back to you all..."
"fine by us!!" I was suddenly struck on the side... the pain was excruciating, I knew these were my fallen brothers, they pushed me around, and the music got louder, I felt useless..

"Estalious! GET A HOLD OF YOUR SELF! you need to help me..." I heard a voice say, as I was hit towards the floor then thrown across the room...
"Estalious!!!" It was Visoth!

I tried to pick myself up.. But the drink that Gaz took, had rendered me useless, I couldn't focus right..and the burden was still there. My Fallen brothers, continuously mocked me, and battered me... They smashed me into this strange neon glowing wall.. My vision became more blurred, then suddenly.. darkness...

"No! ESTALIOUSsssss!!!"

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The Past Demon

Chapter 6: Strange Sensations

Time passed, regardless of what Visoth said, I still thought my theory of all play was correct, Gaz didn't seem to do anything productive in my point of view, everyday he'd build blocks of different colours and make something that reassembles a small cube, and played with these yellow coloured humans. Though i thought that this was such a pointless life. Though, strangely enough, doing all these foolish things actually brought a great sense of comfort to me.I suppose these were human emotions, I felt somewhat happiness and joy, i couldn't express this feeling i felt from this boy, Gaz..

It was like, your heart pumped faster, and the blood rushed throughout your body, giving you this great sense of happiness, and it starts to become more and more joyous as time goes by, till you wished it never ended. I suppose I could compare it to the time I used to dance and sing and play before the creator, where everything was bliss and good.

But that time was long past, if this was all there was to human life, I can say I don't have a clue what the creator meant by it's not going to be easy, because, it feels like life's going to be a breeze!

However, I was proven wrong, I felt the presence of my fallen brothers grow stronger, as time came to pass, the familiar ravaging sense, for chaos and disorder became more and more distinct, I could sense how much more corrupt they have become since the fall, and the stench of the evil aura coming from them was strong, so strong that one could even smell it from a mile away.

*clinggg* the familiar sound, that I thought I'd never hear again, a sound of an angel blade meeting with another blade, it was the sound of warfare! as I looked around, I saw nothing, but the sound was so loud and distinct that it felt as if it was right next to me. Suddenly I heard a great cry of strength.
"ARGHH!", at first I couldn't quite decipher the voice i had heard heard, But as more blades started to clash with one another, I had figured out who it was that was screaming earlier, it was visoth! This meant only one thing, that my fallen brothers have arrived and I was very sure they were not here to say hello to me.

The sound of blades clashing among one another continued for hours, yet during this time, it seemed as if Gaz was in complete peace, he was sleeping in his mothers arms so peacefully. I was thinking to myself, these humans are crazy! how can they sleep in such a crazed and outrageous sound of war! then it dawned upon me. If they can't see me, it's most likely they can't hear me too, thus this war was only for us angels to hear, how blessed the humans are, I thought to myself.

*swoosh* suddenly a fiery dart flew across the room, "what was this?" I thought to myself. I read the inscriptions on the dart, it read out, brokenness, lust, death, murder, cheating, chaos. Then in the next second, 5 more darts flew pass, just missing Gaz by a millimeter, I knew I could not let these darts reach Gaz or else his life might be in jeopardy, I decided to take out my weapon to deflect the darts from touching Gaz, I remembered clearly what the Creator told me, and I wasn't keen in failing Him two times in a row!

"Gotchya!" I shouted as I hit the last dart away from Gaz, I was pretty proud of myself, I have successfully parried all the darts that were set out to destroy Gaz's life.
"Hahaha bring it on! nothing is going pass me" I said cheerfully.
But just as I said that, I heard a snicker, and a voice which sounded so coarse and demented say," You haven't won any battle Estalious! double traitor, first to the creator now to our Master!The great deceiver.."
"Who are you?!" I demanded,
The voice faded into the dark, snickering...
As I turned around I understood what he meant by I haven't won the battle, the darts were all across the room, and one of them managed to hit the leg of Gaz's mother...
What doom was in front? I had no idea what power these new and very strange darts held, but I knew nothing good would come out of it...

Inscribed into the dart was"Sickness, Death, hurt, pain.." I couldn't imagine what the future held for Gaz and his mother...

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End of chapter 6 peeps! :) hope you're all enjoying this! going to continue to chapter 7 hopefully before the end of this week!